Feedback for Assignment 3 The Decisive Moment.

I think you have captured a feeling of the decisive moment well within your work here.

Your technical and visual skills are competent .You have quite a graphic style to your compositions which I like, it declutters your images, in some cases rendering them quite abstract such as your image of palm leaves and the blue windows.

Your images are exposed correctly with vivid colours. You have observed and captured interesting moments which bring life to the  places you have photographed.

Your work is presented well, however, I think you need to consider the order/sequence of your images as the last two images are very similar in composition and subject matter. A good way to sequence your images is to have one of your strongest images first and last. Then create a balance so that they tell a story without repeating themselves.

Competent realisation of ideas, presented well, showing consistency in judgement.Your ideas are coming across well in your images, showing the decisive moment in each image but in a relatively subtle way.

Some evidence of creativity, little evidence of risk-taking, with a few imaginative outcomes.

Your work is starting to show your personal voice with your images being personal to you, other people might not take images like these. I would however like to see more experimentation in your images, particularly in your subject and experimenting with viewpoint, getting closer and concepts and ideas.

 

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