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Demonstration of Technical and Visual Skills:

Materials, techniques, observational skills, visual awareness, design and compositional skills

Your work for this assignment has shown very competent technical and visual skills. The lighting and in particular use of darkness for a background works very well. The use of screens and shadows is highly effective. You have constructed these images to only show exactly what you want to show and so visual awareness, design and composition have all been carefully and effectively controlled.

Quality of Outcome:

Content, application of knowledge, presentation of work in a coherent manner, discernment, conceptualisation of thoughts, communication of ideas.

Your work has been presented well, I could see this work as large prints in an exhibition. You have communicated your ideas effectively, there are a lot of signs and symbols in these images and I would be interested to see a write up on the thoughts for each image. Also could they have text accompany them to emphasise the idea or do you think this would detract?

Highly effective work presented in a professional way, showing strong judgement.

Demonstration of Creativity:

Imagination, experimentation, invention, development of a personal voice.

Strongly creative, takes risks with many imaginative and successful outcomes, strong evidence of personal voice. I think your idea and the way you have gone about constructing it is very personal to you. Well done.

You have experimented with lighting and reflections in your image to create images which are full of layers of interest to keep you looking at them for longer and trying to“read” the images.

 Coursework:

I can see exercises have been completed from the write up on your work submitted, however for assessment the exercises will need to be provided on your blog.

 Research:

Context, reflective thinking, critical thinking, analysis.

I can also see you have completed thorough research from the write up of your work. You have reflected well on your own work and the work of other photographers.

Learning Log:

Very articulate and self aware, very well researched, demonstrating a developed intellectual understanding. Make sure that everything is on your blog for assessment.

Pointers for the next assignment / assessment

  • Keep up the good work
  • Make sure everything is evidenced on your blog

 

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